Arrow
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Post by Arrow on Jun 11, 2017 7:43:44 GMT 9.5
It's hot outside, I don't like heat and I just started typing this poem. Ever since I took this Intro to Creative Writing class, I quite enjoy writing poems. This one is a bit depressing and dark, but the words just kind of started to flow and I rolled with it. I wanted to share and see what people think. Thanks guys Edit: This is still in a personal edit so, the grammar, punctuation and some parts may be added or taken out as I see fit. The Grey Shadow poem.docx (13.28 KB)
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Arrow
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"How are you suppose to fly, if you don't open your wings and try?"
Posts: 34
Profile Info: "Are you wild like me?"
What Do you idenify as?: Werecreature
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Post by Arrow on Jun 11, 2017 8:47:39 GMT 9.5
Another edit to this, I've only edited this like 5 times since I uploaded it. I changed a few things to this version and I'm currious which one you like better, or if you would like certain parts added to the finial. The Grey Shadow poem 2.docx (12.75 KB)
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Post by springshifter on Jun 11, 2017 9:14:51 GMT 9.5
Wow cool. I write as well. I'm not a poet but I am a creative writer.
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Arrow
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"How are you suppose to fly, if you don't open your wings and try?"
Posts: 34
Profile Info: "Are you wild like me?"
What Do you idenify as?: Werecreature
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Post by Arrow on Jun 11, 2017 10:48:19 GMT 9.5
I usually write stories myself, but this class opened my eyes to how interesting poems can be. I've liked them ever since.
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Post by springshifter on Jun 11, 2017 11:11:17 GMT 9.5
Ah I see. I mean I wrote a few poems before but they weren't that good. I like your new avatar!
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Arrow
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"How are you suppose to fly, if you don't open your wings and try?"
Posts: 34
Profile Info: "Are you wild like me?"
What Do you idenify as?: Werecreature
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Post by Arrow on Jun 11, 2017 22:12:57 GMT 9.5
Thank you I was trying to find both a wolf and a snow leopard, but this happened to show up and I just rolled with it.
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Post by Eshtar on Jun 14, 2017 17:38:36 GMT 9.5
I would love to join to if thats ok?
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Arrow
Newbie
"How are you suppose to fly, if you don't open your wings and try?"
Posts: 34
Profile Info: "Are you wild like me?"
What Do you idenify as?: Werecreature
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Post by Arrow on Jun 15, 2017 6:55:02 GMT 9.5
join what? I'm slightly confused.
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Post by Eshtar on Jun 15, 2017 7:16:51 GMT 9.5
oops I thought it was something to join Spawns pack and whatnot *blushes* wrong one.
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